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What is the limit for life to be sustained?
A crackle of skin carried by the breeze; a sign of change.
Does the mind power the body when it is exhausted?
Footsteps echo with the sound of a missing heart.
Can sightless eyes see beyond the physical realm?
Desperation is evident; though the subject no longer knows it.
When will the restless submit to frailty?
Follow the path and vengance shall be yours.
©2005-2009 `Blue-Six
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Author's Comments

This was a poem inspired by one of ~ Raineater's images --> [link]

I tried to make it even trickier by writing it, but not reading the story/prose/poem that she had written for it ^^; and by writing in a question - description style, so if it doesn't match up well, sorry about that. :nod:

Enjoy! :D

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:iconbernadette24:
wow this is awsome!!:glomp: very very good!

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***********`·.¸.·´************ i'm a big dork^_^
:iconblue-six:
Thanks! :glomp:

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l'homme est d'abord ce qui se jette vers un avenir,
et ce qui est conscient de se projeter dans l'avenir.

Il est plus aisé d'être sage pour les autres que de l'être pour soi-même.
:icontransparentpoet:
Fwoah! That was awesome! I don't favorite many poets but I think i'll put yours on the spot. Normally I'm a big fan of pretty pictures but who isn't...right?^^; I like your style. It's the first time I've liked anyone's style on here really. At least those I've found.

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[link] My poetic mind excretions:invisible:
:iconblue-six:
Thanks for the comment and compliment! :nod:

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l'homme est d'abord ce qui se jette vers un avenir,
et ce qui est conscient de se projeter dans l'avenir.

Il est plus aisé d'être sage pour les autres que de l'être pour soi-même.
:icontransparentpoet:
Anytime. When people compliment my work I get to experience theirs and yours was quite the experience.

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[link] My poetic mind excretions:invisible:
:iconkyban:
This poem slowlyleans towards the idea that there is an afterlife, or something like that...Which is an eerie idea, but it does suggest it - In my view of what you have written, that is. I really like this poem :+favs:

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